After marking your 1st notes expansion, I noticed that most of you do not have much grammar mistakes except a few of you . That is a good point. However, some of your stories are too short. You are only expanding the notes . I don't see much effort!
As I have mentioned in class, a good story must have :
1. Introduction ( When / Who / What / Where ? ) ,
2. The body ( the event / incident ) and
3. The ending ( end with an idiom or a lesson learnt. )
To make your story more interesting and different from others, add adjectives to the nouns ( people, things, animals, places ) and adverbs to verbs ( actions ).
Put in your own ideas. Use similies or idioms which are appropriate.
As usual , proofread your work and edit .
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